Let me close my eyes.
And drift away in another world.
Where I inhale glitter of glee.
Where grass is beneath my bare feet.
As I walk in the fields, it takes my fears away.
A place where every child convulses with laughter.
A place where they are not scared of a monster.
That’s the place I want to live in, So
Let me close my eyes and drift away!
~~Javeria Zaheer.~~
03-Aug-16.
9:23PM.
Dear Javeria very well knit literary effort by you . I am glad that you have power of imagery carrying certain wisdom . At that stage of mind go ahead with your instant feelings by keeping yourself one domain of mind . Hope you will continue your spontaneous flow of feelings . Regards
ReplyDeleteKHALID MAHMOOD KAYANI
Thanks for your prestigious comment Sir Khalid. :))
DeleteDEAR JAVERIA ZAHEER...
DeleteHope you will mend feelings little bit by following certain rhyming scheme as well ...... if can afford easily otherwise open ended experience seemed remarkable.... areas of interest is also universal and luring indeed....keep it up please
I will Insha'Allah.
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